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原文： Yet it was a manly face, serious and intelligent, and Chu judged him to be in his middle twenties.
译文： 可是，那是一张严肃而睿智的男子的面庞，朱（德）判断他在二十到三十岁之间。

改译：可是，那是一张男子汉的面庞，严肃而睿智，朱（德）判断他大概是二十五六岁的年龄。