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改进题：Out of the corner of his eye he could see the landscape. It was industrial and at that hour,sad.

译文：在他的眼角之外，还有工业区的风景在很悲伤的那个时候。

改进的译文：他眼角的余光还能瞥见窗外的景色。这里是工业区，此刻一片萧条景象。