原文:最令人怵目惊心的一件事,是看着钟表上的秒针一下一下的移动,每移动一下就是表示我们的寿命已经缩短了一部分。译文:It is most starling to see a watch or clock clicking away the seconds,each click indicating the shortening ofone's life by a little bit.
改译:It is most startling to hear a watch or clock clicking away the seconds, each click indicating the shortening of one’s life by a little bit.