原文: 总之，合逻辑、合文法和运用较好的修辞，这三点请你们在写文章的时候注意。
译文: In short, being logical, being grammatical and to have a better command of rhetoric are the three points I would like you to bear in mind when you write.
改译：In short, to be logical, to be grammatical and to have a better command of rhetoric these are the three points I would like you to bear in mind when you write.
