改进题:Until the domain theory of magnetism was developed, they did not have much success.
译文:直到磁力学理论被提出,他们才取得了巨大的成功。
改进的译文:直到提出了磁力学理论,他们才取得了巨大的成功。
改进题:Until the domain theory of magnetism was developed, they did not have much success.
译文:直到磁力学理论被提出,他们才取得了巨大的成功。
改进的译文:直到提出了磁力学理论,他们才取得了巨大的成功。