改进题:The doctor's extremely quick arrival and uncommonly careful examination of the patient brought about his very speedy recovery.
译文:医生非常迅速地到达了,并且非常仔细地检查病人过后,认为病人将很快就康复。
改进的译文:医生非常迅速地到达了,并且非常仔细地检查了病人,因此病人很快就康复了。
改进题:The doctor's extremely quick arrival and uncommonly careful examination of the patient brought about his very speedy recovery.
译文:医生非常迅速地到达了,并且非常仔细地检查病人过后,认为病人将很快就康复。
改进的译文:医生非常迅速地到达了,并且非常仔细地检查了病人,因此病人很快就康复了。