改进题:Business is a combination of all these activities: production, distribution and sale,through which profit or economic surplus will be created.
译文:商业是通过生产、分销和销售这些活动的组合,来创造利润和经济盈余。
改进的译文:商务是指生产、配送、销售等一切活动的组合,通过这些活动,创造利润和经济盈余。
改进题:Business is a combination of all these activities: production, distribution and sale,through which profit or economic surplus will be created.
译文:商业是通过生产、分销和销售这些活动的组合,来创造利润和经济盈余。
改进的译文:商务是指生产、配送、销售等一切活动的组合,通过这些活动,创造利润和经济盈余。