改进题: You must deliver the goods on board the s.s. “White Bear”within the time limit as stipulated in our contract, otherwise dead freight, if any, should be borne by you.
译文:贵方应按合同规定期限将货物装上“白熊”轮,空舱费也由贵方承担。
改进的译文:贵方应按合同规定期限将货物装上“白熊”轮,否则空舱费盖由贵方承担。
改进题: You must deliver the goods on board the s.s. “White Bear”within the time limit as stipulated in our contract, otherwise dead freight, if any, should be borne by you.
译文:贵方应按合同规定期限将货物装上“白熊”轮,空舱费也由贵方承担。
改进的译文:贵方应按合同规定期限将货物装上“白熊”轮,否则空舱费盖由贵方承担。