为自己加油

Correct or improve the translation of the following English sentences.原文：On that afternoon, I stood on the porch, dumb, expectant. 译文：那天下午，我呆呆地，怀着期待的心情站在门廊里。改译：

​那天下午，我一声不响，怀着期待的心情站在门廊里。