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Correct or improve the translation of the following sentences.原文：We have acquired a keen sense of the diversity, dynamism, and progress of China under your policies of reform and opening to the outside world. 译文：在改革和对外开放政策下，我们强烈地感受到了中国的多样化、活力和进步。​改译：

我们强烈地感受到了你们实行的改革和对外开放政策给中国带来的多样化、活力和进步。