Correct or improve the translation of the following Chinese sentences.原文:总之,合逻辑、合文法和运用较好的修辞,这三点请你们在写文章的时候注意。译文:In short, being logical, being grammatical and to have a better command of rhetoric are the three points I would like you to bear in mind when you write.改译:
IN SHORT, TO BE/BEING LOGICAL, TO BE/BEING GRAMMATICAL AND TO HAVE /HAVING A BETTER COMMAND OF RHETORIC ARE THE THREE POINTS I WOULD LIKE YOU TO BEAR IN MIND WHEN YOU WRITE.