Translation Revision
Directions: Each of the following translated sentences is inadequate. Revise the given versions.原文：他在中国国内旅游过的地方，除了井冈山以外，都是我没有到过的。
译文： In China, he has traveled many places where I have never visited, with the exception of Jing
Translation Revision
Directions: Each of the following translated sentences is inadequate. Revise the given versions.原文：他在中国国内旅游过的地方，除了井冈山以外，都是我没有到过的。
译文： In China, he has traveled many places where I have never visited, with the exception of Jinggang Mountains.改译：
IN CHINA, HE HAS BEEN TO MANY PLACES WHICH I HAVE NEVER VISITED, WITH THE EXCEPTION OF JINGGANG MOUNTAINS.
