为自己加油

Correct or improve the translation of the following sentences.原文： He wished that he had asked her to dance, and that he knew her name. 译文：他真希望自己请她跳了舞，又知道了她的芳名，那该有多好。​改译：

他真希望自己当时请她跳了舞，现在又知道她的芳名，那该有多好。