The following passage is incomplete with one paragraph missing.Study the passage carefully and write the missing paragraph in about 100 words.Make sure you’re your tone and diction are in unity with the passage provided.
Chat Rooms in the Smartphone Era
Chat rooms have become an integral aspect of people's lives in the smartphone era.
People share news,thoughts,and feelings through lively phone messages.It is no exaggeration to say that every smartphone user belongs to at least one group chat room.Their chat room buddies are mostly family,friends,or people from work.The majority enjoy the casual chats while some occasionally complain about the constant messages from the workplace. Admittedly chat rooms strengthen family ties and friendships though work-related chat rooms may bother some who care much about their after-work leisure.
To start with,smartphone chat rooms can help narrow emotional distance between family members who live together under the same roof. Words like“thank you”and“sorry" that can be heard frequently among colleagues and strangers are less often spoken among family members.Thanks to chat rooms,these emotions can now be shared through a wide selection of expressive emoticons(表情符号).Specifically,chat rooms can serve as a helpful connection between parents and children,who may otherwise be out of touch with each other most of the time.Listening to their children and being aware of even little things going on in their lives through family chat rooms contribute to better parenting.
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Are group chat rooms just as beneficial in the workplace?The answer is no.The chief reason is that employees have to be available 24/7.While a chat room keeps them informed,employees often feel harassed by messages from the boss,especially after work hours.For example,the boss may check an employee's work,giving more instructions,even long after office hours.If the employee does not reply to the message,it would be the same thing as ignoring the boss.Worse still, employees are not free to simply leave the chat room.They are afraid if they are not part of that online space,they will be left out of real-life interaction with their colleagues.That is why some people view the chat room as prison in the workplace.
In a word,while people appreciate the benefits of connecting and communicating with family members,friends and workmates,they may also suffer from the harassments of work messages in their leisure time.Yet,like it or not,chat rooms are here to stay.
Chat rooms also connect friends who live far apart. In a recent survey, an interviewee said that she chatted with her friends almost every day thanks to the quicker, easier, and simpler way of communication. She admitted that she could write"I miss you and"I love you"more often, whereas these words did not come so easily to her on the phone. In the group chat rooms, old schoolmates and childhood pals having migrated to other countries are blessed with a place online for an instant reunion. friends can communicate freely without much limitation of time and space. (99 words)
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1.本部分满分20分,按四个档次给分。其中12分为及格分,需要慎重把握。
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3.写作的用词量如果不符合要求,应酌情减分。
4.拼写错误每四个扣1分,但不重复扣分
5.分值不得出现0.5分。
第一档(17-20分):上下连贯,意思完整,语言通顺,表达清楚,很少有语法错误和拼写错误。
第二档(12-16分):上下较连贯,语言较通顺,表达较清楚,有少数语法错误和拼写错误。
第三档(8-11分):上下基本连贯,语言表达不够清楚,有较多语法错误和拼写错误。
第四档:上下不够连贯,语言不够通顺,表达不清楚,有大量语法错误和拼写错误。